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Wednesday 29 May 2019

Our Autumn Tree


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.

Our Autumn Tree is glowing. The colourful leaves are fluttering and rustling in the wind. The leaves are falling softly to the ground. The brown dried leaves are crunching under my feet and crackling when we stand on them.
                                                    By Graziel

2 comments:

  1. well done Graziel, we are proud of you 🎉

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  2. Hello Graziel, I enjoyed reading your descriptive text about the autumn leaves. The big oak tree outside room one is beautiful and very colourful. Well done, Graziel.

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